Reflection

Through out my writing assignments I've noticed a lot of the same mistakes. I normally have a hard time with writing my conclusions as mentioned by ShyNiqua Thompson in my Nature Essay. I've also noticed how i have a hard time with my being verbs and using them in moderation as mentioned by Mrs. Turner in pretty much all of my essays. In my Scarlet Letter Essay, I believe i had good insight with the whole concept of my writing, but when i used my quotes I didn't really elaborate as well as I should have. I didn't get to read a lot of peoples writing but out of the ones i read, i liked ShyNiqua's Rollerblading Essay and Hank's Scarlet Letter Essay. In ShyNiqua's essay I really admired the humorous voice in it, as well as the actual story itself. And as to Hank's essay it was to be honest unbelievable.